WWW: this is a really exciting project! You have fully understood and explored the work of your contextual references.
EBI: The cityscapes are a strong theme in your work. Explore geometric forms some of the landmarks, such as the suspension bridge. I will travel to more inner city spaces and incorporate the geometric shapes they offer. I will also focus on using glow sticks.
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A confident start to your writing, you have outlined the main intention of the photographers work. This is good as it helps to build up a context for the picture. EBI: can you specify which shapes you might use? Could you also explain the step-by-step process? Do you think that Wylie is making connections with the environment through his photography?
responses: I will create arefined version of my critical analysis, first response: Great start! Although a "sporadic" start, you have done exactly what I would do, which is to record until I find that focus. Well done! To improve: Select 3 best examples from your first shoot to refine and edit in Photoshop. Record the process.
second response: Some really pleasing results. Your investigation into puddles is a strong subject. To improve: make sure edits are directly underneath your photoshoots. Try using a lower angle, like in your 2nd shoot, when recording reflections in puddles. To respond I will require additional photos too my shoots. Great start! Although a "sporadic" start, you have done exactly what I would do, which is to record until I find that focus. Well done! To improve: Select 3 best examples from your first shoot to refine and edit in Photoshop. Record the process.
I have begun by refining my images. I will continuing by working on AO4. Some lovely photographs from shoot 3. I really like the soft focus you have achieved in some of your images. You must include the research and starting points for your ideas!
I have developed further research into miniature worlds by creating popplets and information on slinkachu. You have yet to make a reasonable start with the project. You are missing ALL the basic elements of a project: initial ideas, initial photoshoots, the development of an idea. In order to complete this unit, you will need to research Slinkachu, present ideas for a response through a mindmap, collect images that inspire you and conduct at least 5 photoshoots.
A reasonably good start. You have explored some ideas. You must evidence that you can critically analyse the work of others.
AO1: Research into photographers: 2 AO2: experimenting : 0 AO3: Recording ideas: 4 AO4: Final piece: 0 cg: 6u student response: I will try to incorporate some more experimenting and further critical analysis. To improve my critical analysis I will go into further detail. WWW: good starting point for miniature worlds.
EBI: no evidence of recording ideas for any project. You must show what your initial ideas are through mindmapping and collecting/discussing the work of photographers. Student response: I will sort out my missing research by uploading missing work. Also I will incoporate more mindmaps. i will improve by incorporating my own examples in homework. A add in missing images.
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